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1. rq says

   September 8, 2017 at 5:51 pm

   I like both titles. Perhaps they should be a paired work. :)
   I like the world you’re building here. Vulvas, hearts, parts of faces and a lot of skin made into a visual geography -- like patterns of ice.

2. Caine says

   September 8, 2017 at 5:53 pm

   It’s your world, rq, like I said, I’m just filling in the title! It adopted me, and lodged in my head, that title.

3. Caine says

   September 8, 2017 at 8:22 pm

   Okay, rq, how about I keep working on Ghosts of Love in Winter, and you work on Ghosts of Winter in Love? :D

4. chigau (違う) says

   September 8, 2017 at 9:42 pm

   speaking of languages … are these
   Ghosts of
   Love in Winter
   and
   Ghosts of
   Winter in Love
   .
   or
   Ghosts of Love
   in Winter
   and
   Ghosts of Winter
   in Love
   ?
   or something else
   .
   I ask because I am intensifying my Japanese language studying and am trying to translate almost everything I encounter.
   making sense modifiers is 難しい

5. Caine says

   September 9, 2017 at 9:33 am

   Umm, second one.

6. rq says

   September 9, 2017 at 4:29 pm

   Caine
   Sounds like a plan!
   Also agreed on the second option in chigau’s list.